The Grand Poetry Reveal

August 4, 2010 at 12:53 am (Uncategorized)

Sitting in a dimly lit room, mugs of tea clutched in hand, I chatted with the President of the American Corner and a Czech woman living in Debrecen. The President I knew well, as I visited the American Corner Library weekly for new books and we shared a love of wine. The Czech woman was new, so as we chatted, the fact came out that both of us wrote poetry as a hobby. The wheels in Ms. President’s head started turning, as she was always looking for new workshops and lectures at the American Corner. “Hey girls,” she said with a sly look in her eye. “What about doing a poetry evening at the AC? I know a Hungarian write, you’re Czech, and you’re American, so we can have poetry represented from different countries! It’s also womens month, and you’re all women, so it’s perfect!”

“Sure,” we agreed with a smile, chattering a bit, but not taking her seriously. It wasn’t until she emailed both of us wanting to have a planning meeting that we both stalled, shocked that anyone would want to hear our poetry! Ms. President pressed us, and it morphed into an international women’s poetry event.

Before I went to Hungary I made a list of 5 things that I wanted to accomplish, and writing a poem a week was one of them. Therefore, I had a huge selection to draw from!

The format comprised of sharing a personal poem, along with a poem written by an established woman poet, and then it was opened up for discussion. A wall was hung with our names and poetry, with comment cards available for critique. The evening was well attended by about 20 people, who all participated and were very charming. The styles represented were phenomenal: The Hungarian girl was very spontaneous, quirky, and had accompanying art with her poems, the Czech girl rode the waves of her emotions (mainly love) with composed music accompanying her reading, while my style is slightly lyrical, narrative, with an emotional tinge. It was a liberating event to read poetry to a live crowd!!!!!

Flora, Veronika, and I in front of our poetry panels!

 

Here are some examples of the best poems of this year: (and I DO appreciate constructive feedback)

“Mosaic”

Do you see in an array

Plaids and mosaics

In concrete and wire?

Rose tinted lenses smother

Or set fire

The mind

Give me colored collages

In the ordinary.

Through the Seasons

Winter’s icy glare melts into spring’s shy embrace

Summer’s playful gaiety soon into autumn fades

Colors transform and alter as minutes pass away

Paths diverge and collide in messy disarray

Yet through the never-ending seasons of change and time

In my poem of life, you are the perpetual rhyme

The expanse of distance is unable to confine

Spirit-filled Love that we share, sealed in prayer, love that binds

Family, neighbor, or penpal, locations are inane

During drought, harvest, thunderclouds, flowers and rain

The world revolves around the fact that will never change

Tied to my heart you will explicably remain

Through the Seasons

“Borders”

A historical moment illuminated

Gestures

Darkening the face as to only see the

Hands and

Triumphant voice

Exhailarating

            He said

Exhilarating

Standing among thousands

Celebrating as One

The freedom of borders

(the freedom I take for granted)

E crossed simply to cross

Waving

At a new world.

Exhilarating

            He said

As the bus chugged across the border

Unnamed Rambling/NightWalk

 

The new day approached by minutes

Shrouded by a haze of darkness and alcohol

My Footsteps, silent on the sidewalks

The clack of heels from a clubber behind me

            Faceless, but cookie-cutter

The buzz of a bicycle

Train whistle

Intoxicating smell lingers, longing to meld with my taste

Of blackberries. Black curls.

Darkness enlivens the urge to shun morals

Boxes and traps of safety and caution

Embrace literally and figuratively my carnal nature

Soft touch and words

Then nothing—no strings—forget

But the rabbit hop thought following

Amber shadows

Illuminate the face of the One

Yours truly, that I try to forget

Every day

Brushing aside thoughts like flies

Tiresome

Yet still they flutter

What’s worse: relief without love or love without relief?

I walk on. The street tilts wildly,

Esteem pendulum is frozen

 

Miklos Utca

Miklos Utca I walk:

            In soul numbing fear

                        Of my inadequacy and drunkards

            With silent tears

                        Flaming rivulets of pain and joy

            Whistles, catcalls, and jeers

                        Arrogant Hungarian men

            Dreaming careers

                        In a fuzzy future

            Down my block long mirror

                        The only full-length image

            A listening ear

                        To cars, bells, murmurings

            The healing year

Miklos Utca

Pour me Another Glass

Pour me another glass

Add a wink

I’m drinking your gaze like a parched desert wanderer

Your voice my anchor I cling

Against the torrent of uncertainty

Another Day

Took a stroll in the dusk

Searching for your face

Between flowers and cigarettes

Down alleyways

Yellow light blinked caution

Thunder bikes raced

Fountains gurgled summer

Your piercing gaze . . . .

            Slowly erased

            Maybe another day.

“The Snore”

In the bright yellow room

With chocolate candles burning

My reverie is cracked

By horrifying snoring

Man or woman who can tell

A freight train has no gender

Where’s a crimson sticker

That says “Return to Sender?”

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